Hahahaa, u know what really made it funny for me was the "rawa" bit...lol. I liked this one, original, and starting to develop the story. I have a problem with the tag "coach's home", the environment is quite self explanatory -- the one saying coach, of course - we don't know where they are...but not coach's home somehow. Keep it up
now we are back on track...i'm digging the colored surprise marks. I don't know about any other person but little things like that make a huge difference to me. For some reason, i'm not digging how you went wild with the background. I'm loving the color mind you, but i think the blue is just too bright to pull off with a normal gradient. I'd advice to do gradient's with colors that aren't so vibrant. Oh and the identity of the characters is truly beginning to bloom. I'm digging how you kept the consistency in character behavior
Thanks for the words. I really wanted to use a different color than the cream and yellows I used before. I intentionally wanted it to be vibrant. Besides I had to use a different color or all the strips would start to look similar. Stay tuned as we explore some lecturers at their cooky excuse for a University
This is just a little joke about cafeteria food. Hope you guys enjoy it at least. I'm excited about next weeks strips. Hope you guys feel it. Till then, please give feedback and keep checking. Peace M
Hey Mistiqs, Gotta be honest I'm a lil cheesed no1 noticed I had 2 strips worth of story last week cause I could have easily spread that story over 2 weeks (probably what I should have done in hindsight) but I wanted to give y'all something special. Whining aside. This weeks story may not resonate with everyone but HAIL to those that feel me on this and those that don't I hope you can still appreciate it. Enjoy M
Hahahaa, u know what really made it funny for me was the "rawa" bit...lol. I liked this one, original, and starting to develop the story. I have a problem with the tag "coach's home", the environment is quite self explanatory -- the one saying coach, of course - we don't know where they are...but not coach's home somehow.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up
Nurah
Thanks for the feedback.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked it.
Please keep the word spreading.
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now we are back on track...i'm digging the colored surprise marks. I don't know about any other person but little things like that make a huge difference to me. For some reason, i'm not digging how you went wild with the background. I'm loving the color mind you, but i think the blue is just too bright to pull off with a normal gradient. I'd advice to do gradient's with colors that aren't so vibrant. Oh and the identity of the characters is truly beginning to bloom. I'm digging how you kept the consistency in character behavior
ReplyDeleteThanks for the words.
ReplyDeleteI really wanted to use a different color than the cream and yellows I used before.
I intentionally wanted it to be vibrant.
Besides I had to use a different color or all the strips would start to look similar.
Stay tuned as we explore some lecturers at their cooky excuse for a University
M
I see you put up a picture.
ReplyDeleteNice
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